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I went to the park.
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On Sunday afternoon I went to the park in Opononi with my aunty to have fun and to play on the playground.
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I felt happy to go to the park.
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When we got to the park we saw lots of people.
I said, “There are lots of people.”
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The first thing I did at the park was to play in the sand.
I felt happy and good.
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Next I went to the slide. I said, “Sliding down the slide is fun.”
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After that I went home. I felt it was the best day ever.
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