Recount Writing - On Sunday

WALT write our ideas in order and to add our thoughts and feelings.

20.03.17

On Sunday

On Sunday afternoon I went with my Family to the Park for the day.

First I played TAG with my sister. It was fun.

Then we had some lunch. For lunch we had pizza. It was Yummy.

Next day we went to the Warehouse.  We had some lollipops. After that we went back to the car.

Later on we went to the pools for a swim. It was cool.

Finally we went home for a sleep.

Here are my learning goals for Term 1 2017.

Recount Writing

I am learning to write my ideas in order.

13.03.17

At Home

On Sunday afternoon I stayed home with my family. We went out to play tag.

After that I  went to get dinner.

After dinner I went to play on my mum’s phone. Then I had a nap.

Persuasive Writing

I am learning to write my opinion with reasons.

03.03.17

It is wrong to fight.

I think it is wrong to fight.

Firstly the fighters will say bad words

Secondly I think it is wrong to fight because the fighters will get mad

Another reason is don't be mean  

Lastly don't be bad to others.

Recount Writing.

I am learning to put my thoughts and feelings in my writing. 
07 . 03 .17
At the Park 
On Monday me and my mum went to the park with my friends. First we played TAG. It was fun. After that I had lunch with my mum. It was yummy. NEXT I went home with my mum. On the way home I went to play with my cars. After I did my Homework. It was a very very Fun DAY.

WALT write our opinion with reasons to persuade our readers.

My Persuasive Writing
I think Tautoro School should be a bucket filling school. 
Firstly I think Tautoro School should be a bucket filling school because every person will be caring and nice. Another reason is because there will be no angry people. 
 Lastly I think Tautoro School should be a bucket filling school because people will share. 
So I think Tautoro School should be a bucket filling school.