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Friday, October 20, 2017

Persuasive writing - We should play sport every day

WALT to use the correct structure and language for persuasive writing
19.10.2017
We should play sport every day
I think we should play every day to get fit and to get strong
Firstly I think We should play sport every day because we will get better at sport
Secondly I think  We should play sport every day to get better and better at passing the ball
Another reason why I think we should play sports to try new things
Lastly I think we should play sports to learn how to   kick and to learn new  tricks and  to learn good skills like to throw and  and to get lots of air and wind
So that why I  think We should play sport every day.


 

Wednesday, October 18, 2017

Persuasive Writing - We should do homework every night.

WALT use the correct structure and language for Persuasive Writing.
18.10.2017
We should do homework every night.
I think we should do homework every night.
Firstly I think  we should do homework to learn new words.
Secondly I think we should do homework to get smart and to learn.
Another reason why we should do homework is to give our brain a workout.      
Lastly I think we  should do homework because it helps us to achieve our learning goals when we are practising our learning.

So that's why I think we should do homework every night.        

Recount Writing - At the Beach

WALT use the correct structure for Recount Writing.
16.10.17
At the beach
On a lovely Monday morning I went to the beach with my mum and dad for a swim. We drove to the beach. When we arrived, I put my togs on then I jumped in the water
for a swim. I was playing with my dad in the water.
We were going to play with the rocks but we made sand balls and we were throwing the sand balls. When we went back in the water me and my mum went to the water with the sand balls. After that I went to have something to eat. Mum said, “Let's go to KFC for dinner.” So we went to KFc for dinner. It was yummy. After dinner we went home and I went to play my mum's ipod. Then Mum said, “Bedtime.” Than I went to bed.