I am learning to use the correct structure and language for recount writing.
25/07/17
Going to Kmart in Auckland
On Monday afternoon I went to Auckland to Kmart with me and my mum. When we went in I saw lots of toys to buy.
I went to get something to buy. I went to buy chocolate and some toys so I can sit and play with my toys.
I felt so good to be at Auckland for the day. My Mum paid for our stuff and then I said, “Mum I want some KFC for lunch.” She said, “Ok let's go to get some KFC.”
So we got to KFC and ordered our food.
I said, “Mmmmmm thanks Mum. Let's go home for a rest.”
So we went home. I said, “That was a cool day. I felt like I was in the air.
