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Tuesday, February 27, 2018

Explanation Writing - bucket filling

WALT:use the correct Strueture and language for Explanation Writing
Bucket filling.
Everyone in the world carries an invisible bucket filled with good thoughts and nice feelings.Being a bucket filler is filling other people’s buckets with nice thoughts and feelings.
Bucket filling works by showing respect and kindness to others, and helping others because  they feel good and happy. Saying nice words to others makes everyone feel safe and nice so your place is happy.
A Bucket filler is When you fill someone’s bucket because You feel good when you help others feel good.
We feel very happy and good when our buckets are fill
Bucket filling make everyone  Around you be happy and safe,Or you can fill others people buckets up And they will fill your bucket too.

Monday, February 19, 2018

Recount Writing: WALT use the correct structure for recount writing

12.2.17.On Sunday Me and my family went to the beach In paihia.
First Me and my sister put our togs on Me and my sister went in the water For a swim first before we play in the sand.
Next I got out of the water To have something to eat I had something to eat But I wait for a little and I had a rest then I went to go play in the sand I Made a sandcastle it was fun making one I made a big sandcastle  that I can Go in when I went in the sandcastle I played around in the sandcastle then My sister came and she went back in the water.
After that My dad came in the water for a swim My Mum and my little sister Stay in the sand with My Mum.  Me and my sister got out of the water.
Later on Me and my family went to The treaty grounds to have lunch there.
Then we went back to the beach.
Finally We got back to the beach My mum and dad had a swim And my Sister went for a swim with Our mum and dad So I stayed with My little Sister Me and my little sister  I took her for a walk  To the park then  I went Back to our car with her she was asleep so I tell my mum so my mum said Let's go home so we went home My mum. was driving Me my dad and little Sister went to sleep when we got home I went to bed for a nap But then My Little sister woke up and my mum and dad and sister was gone to town so I Went to get her and I  gave her a bottle my mum got back from town with My sister and dad they came inside and they bought Stuff for our School  Lunch.When they got home i was Watching TV later on I woke up I said to My mum bye im going to school but she said it's the holidays stail  So When I walked out the door my Mum turned me around and I was on the couch  I Was playing on The laptop I was playing on youtube.       


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