Kullen: Persuasive Writing

Saturday, March 11, 2017

I am learning to write my opinion with reasons.

03.03.17

It is wrong to fight.

I think it is wrong to fight.

Firstly the fighters will say bad words

Secondly I think it is wrong to fight because the fighters will get mad

Another reason is don't be mean

Lastly don't be bad to others.

AnonymousMarch 15, 2017 at 7:34 PM
Hi Kullen,what a cool as story my brother love your amazing words.Keep up the good work.
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AnonymousMarch 15, 2017 at 7:35 PM
Hi Kullen,what a cool as story my brother love your amazing words.Keep up the good work.
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